Carl Zimmer

Carl Zimmer
2019 Science Writing Workshop

Monday January 28, 2019
Monday February 4, 2019
2:30 PM - 4:30 PM
OML RM 202 (165 Prospect St.)

Instructor: Carl Zimmer
Email: carl@carlzimmer.com
Website: carlzimmer.com

Workshop registration: Workshop registration opens November 15, 2018 to all graduate students. To register, please complete the registration form at https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1DSYPRth_hIDfE623GmdcAoFPwJaVInjePMl5u7Y... (note that you will be required to sign into your Yale account). If you do not have a Yale ID and wish to register and attend the sessions, please email deanna.brunson@yale.edu

Workshop objectives: This workshop will introduce science graduate students to writing about science for a broad, non-scientist audience.

Course schedule:

First meeting: Monday January 28th 2:30 PM - 4:30 PM

This session will begin with a discussion about science writing, considering techniques required for good science writing. We will use the assigned reading below as the basis for the discussion.

I will describe in some detail how I produced one of my own articles, starting with the paper on which it was based.

Finally, we will discuss the course assignment (details below).

TECHNIQUE:

Ian Bogost. “Scholars Shouldn’t Fear Dumbing Down.” The Atlantic, October 26, 2018 https://www.theatlantic.com/science/archive/2018/10/scholars-shouldnt-fe...

I highly recommend these three books:

Steven Pinker, The Sense of Style: The Thinking Person’s Guide to Writing in the 21st Century. (Amazon page http://www.amazon.com/The-Sense-Style-Thlnklng-Persons/dp/0670025852(link is external))

A Field Guide for Science Writers https://www.amazon.com/Field-Guide-Science-Writers-Association/dp/019517... In particular, I suggest reading these two sections: 17. Deadline Writing, by Gareth Cook. (p.111); and 22. The Science Essay, Robert Kanigel (p.145)

The Science Writer’s Handbook. https://www.amazon.com/Field-Guide-Science-Writers-Association/dp/019517...

Questions to consider: In Field Guide, Cook and Kanigel describe very different forms of science writing. What techniques are common them? What are the most important differences? Do you think that these differences are a matter of convention or reflect the essential rules of each genre? How do these techniques impair or strengthen articles about science? Do any of these techniques apply to communication such as television or blogs? How do the perspectives of Cook and Kanigel, two journalists, compare to that of Pinker, a scientist who is also an excellent writer?

EXAMPLES OF SCIENCE WRITING

Nicola Twilley, “How the First Gravitational Waves Were Found” New Yorker https://www.newyorker.com/tech/elements/gravitational-waves-exist-heres-...

Jon Mooalem “The Amateur Cloud Society That (Sort Of) Rattled the Scientific Community.” New York Times Magazine https://www.nytimes.com/2016/05/08/magazine/the-amateur-cloud-society-th...

Jessica Wapner, “Austin, Indiana: the HIV capital of small-town America” Mosaic https://mosaicscience.com/story/austin-indiana-hiv-america-syndemics?src...

FROM PAPER TO ARTICLE:

The paper:

Lee, James J., et al. "Gene discovery and polygenic prediction from a genome-wide association study of educational attainment in 1.1 million individuals." Nature Genetics 50.8 (2018): 1112.

Linkhttps://www.nature.com/articles/s41588-018-0147-3

FAQ from the study’s authors: https://www.thessgac.org/faqs

The article:

“Years of Education Influenced by Genetic Makeup, Enormous Study Finds” New York Times, July 23, 2018
Link: https://nyti.ms/2LIiG46

Questions to consider: This article is about a complex, contentious study linking education and genes. Look at the paper and the FAQ. What similarities in structure do you see? What is in the story that was not in the paper? What was left out? What elements in the article are intended for a wide audience, as opposed to the narrower audience for the paper? How does the story balance different views on the research?

WRITING ASSIGNMENT

Pick a new scientific paper in an area of your choosing. Write a 600-word explanation of the research.

You are free to choose the style in which you write your assignment. It may be an opinion piece, a piece of straight news reporting as you’d see in a newspaper, or a more creative piece you might find in a magazine.

However, you approach it, you must explain why the scientists did the research, how they did it, and what they learned from it-and in such a way that a lay reader can understand it (and even enjoy it).

The first step towards good writing is good language. So, avoid all jargon, no matter how tempting. See here for an index of words I’ve banned from previous classes: https://www.nationalgeographic.com/science/phenomena/2009/11/30/the-inde...

To research your piece, read the paper, look for any commentaries in the journals, and find background reading for context. If necessary, try to find a grad student at Yale or elsewhere who can take you through the research.

Be sure to include the citation of the paper on your assignment.

Since the assignment is due three days after the first workshop, I’d recommend starting on it before we meet. It may look like a quick task, but many grad students who have taken my workshop have told me it took a lot longer than they expected!

Assignments are due by Thursday, January 31, 2018 at 5 pm. Email them to me at carl@carlzimmer.com

Please note that I will only be able to evaluate pieces by the first 20 students who registered for the workshop. However, all registrants are welcome to attend both sessions, complete the assignment, and participate in the discussions about the assignment in the second session. In order to participate in the second session, waiting list students will need to read the writing assignments I distribute for discussion, and write comments.

On Friday, February 2, I will send all workshop students 2 pieces. Over the weekend, all participants in the second session (Including waiting list students) will be required to write a 100-word critique of each article we will be discussing. The critique should describe a strong point of the article, and suggest a way to improve it. Workshop participants will email copies of their critiques to me and the authors by Sunday night and be prepared to discuss them in the second meeting.

Second Meeting: Monday February 4, 2:30 PM - 4:30 PM.

We will begin this session discussing the writing assignment. Most likely, you will have encountered unexpected challenges, which you are encouraged to describe. We will also discuss the sample pieces I will have distributed the previous Friday. You will be expected to offer constructive criticism about how the stories could be improved.

After discussing the writing assignment, we will survey the many opportunities for writing about science available today, from magazines to blogs to books to radio. We should have additional time for any topics that students wish to discuss further.

Updates:

If there are any updates about this workshop, I will email them to all participants and add them to this page.